Greetings from the Critique Club
Composition
This is beautifully composed shot the eye is led right into the image to the little lass at the end! I hope someone went to her rescue!And the various elements of the photo are well balanced within the frame
Exposure: Contrast & Color, and focus are spot on!
Suggestions for improvement
Perhaps play with the brightness and contrast and see if you can get even more tonality into the scene. And Please do away with the pink border it is a detraction and distraction from a lovely photo!
Sonja, your b&w work is so beautiful. This is such a wonderful, well captured of these future ballerinas. I especially like the little girl on the end who looks like it's time for a potty break.
Pretty. Brings back hideous memories! I love the grainy black and white, although the pink border kind of undermines it a bit. The composition is great.
beautiful! awesome lighting. even tones. look how the girl on the far left is looking into the photo... further enhancing the eye's lead in along the rail and wall. skip - skip - skip along the line of girls whose heads and toes further lead you to the last little girl on the end.. who looks like she has to pee! LOL how darling! what a moment! beautifully captured!
Really nice shot. I might have cropped out the last girl on the right along with the distracting background behind her. The only thing I don't like is the border. I think it kind of detracts from the shot.
I like this shot. The lines (baseboards and handrail) work well. I like the BW, nice tones, but not the border. Good DOF. The kids are really cute, especially the one at the end. She looks like she needs to go pee real bad.
lol. Thisis too cute. Very nice interpretation of the challenge theme. One thing: please change the border. Would work better with only black and/or white. Good luck. Jacko 8
I like almost everything about this shot. Great composition and focus. Perfect in b&w. Just one thing: I think a b&w shot should have a white or black (or both) border not this colour. Just a detail. Overall a great job that gets high score from me. Good luck!
I really love this photo and the frame choice. The b/w choice is wonderful ! It looks like the girl on the far right has to tinkle :) That just makes this photo so cute ! = 10
This is a great shot for perspective and I'm giving it a 10. The black and white along with the composition of this shot is excellent. Your border is very distracting from your image. Since the border color has nothing to do witht eh image and is not supported by any color in the image, it IS distracting.. be careful with that :) - setzler
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