I had to laugh about this first. Then I realized that in the left is a tombstone. I like how the picture suggested two opposite feelings to me in but a second. But that's about all there is to it. The shadow is annoying, because it divides the word Violett in two parts. Nice idea, though.
:) you are taking lot of selfpictures...sure if im not worng.
Idea is good but shadow is distracting specially if you take violett as title. Also background is too busy to make accent on female. Could try other angle or daytime.
In a black and white picture contrast in the key, you get close, especially with the shadow, and the black jacket the girl is wearing, but you are missing the white. The rest of the picture is just grey scale.