Originally posted by sidpixel:
Hello from the critique club
An appealing image that contributes to the challenge
Your image captures the mood well, a bunch of people all in the festive spirit and out to entertain each other and the crowds. Your position is good with the overhead decorations forming an integral part of the overall scene. In terms of the challenge brief, we don’t really get a feeling of transportation simply because we are too close, it would have been better to be further away and show more of the bus preferably including the wheels. |
I had the same feel after I had seen other members submission. I'm on the wrong track.
Thank you so much for your feedback
cheers
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