If you had moved your camera up a couple of feet this could have been excellent. You seemed to have chosen a more bland subject and left the more interesting one as background, plus creating lots of space in between.
I like the idea, but I think this would have worked better with a slight change of angle, moving the pole a bit further to the left without really changing the postition of the boats.
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