If this was a candid: good job, but tighter cropping would have hid her tummy. Also could use a little more contrast.
If this was staged: Would be better with the sunglasses off, put him in something a little more classical (to match the timeless quality of her sweater), and remove his watch, which is a bit distracting to my eye. A different angle - showing less of his face and more of hers - would be preferable (because let's face it, women are generally better to look at than men are!) :)
I hope you don't mind me saying, but this would have been so much more awesome if there was an old guy (possibly her father for story sake?) coming down the tunnel. The two would be getting their final kiss before she's whisked away to a convent somewhere in spain. Great shot anyway 7
The very first kiss, and there you were with a camera? Not likely! LOL. But seriously, the photo looks kind of flat and muddy. Maybe some contrast adjustment would help. I do like that you composed them to the side of the frame to give the viewer a sense of where they are. 5
I think this is an excellent idea that could have been excecuted a little better (IMHO). The sports logos don't go with the theme of the picture and the picture is lacking contrast. Out of curiosity, I ran it through Photoshop and a simple Auto Levels worked wonders instantly. Just a thought.
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