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First off I like what’s going on here. I agree with Konador stating that this could have used a bit more contrast. I do think that a smaller aperture would have been better also, now as to how much. I don't know if you want to see all the way down due to the background might not be as appealing as you would want it, I don't know because I can't make it out. I think the zipper itself should be more in the frame, maybe not center but just not hanging off like that. I like your subject and your attempt.
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