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lighting way too strong here. The glare off the resistor and shadow created underneath give it a snapshot feel and not a photograph. While the eye is clarly drawn to teh subject - the resistor - the surrounding elelments to not progress in any particular order and the void in the foregound leave me to coclude that the composition is weak here. Soften the lighting , even out the composition, and keep shooting. Even try a few different colors of light instead of your flash. |