As each picture comes on the screen I force my first thought to be "would I want it to hang on my wall" second thought "Would I use it commercially" third thought "would I pay money to have a print" fourth "is it technically correct" (the fourth does not matter if 1,2 and 3 are met)
This makes a yes in all 4.
Excellent.
Like the pattern of smoke. Would love to have seen an orange light on the end of the match. You could simulate that in another context. I know you couldn't do that here.