I had seen image from the same environment, not sure you are the same person.
Here are my point of view to your image:
1. Focus
Currently your focus is out. There are few factors affecting your focus – shutter speed is not enough or either the model had moved. You need to shoot wide open say F/4 and pump up your ISO if necessary. Aim at the eyes when you shoot (IMO - in my own opinion)
2. Composition
Do watch out for the background. Avoid overlapping. Right now your model has overlapped with the guy behind. Tried moving to the left.
I feel, in this instance, Point 1 (focus) is crucial, at least to get the viewer attention.
Hope this helps. |
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