Challenge:Calendar (Advanced Editing II) Camera:Kodak DX4530 Location: James S. McDonnell Park, St. Ann, MO Date: Nov 6, 2004 Aperture: f4.1 ISO: 120 Shutter: 1/700 Galleries:Sky, Nature Date Uploaded: Nov 7, 2004
nice colors. however, the image too busy- there's too many things and no clear focal point. it might have been more effective to concentrate on just one leaf, or branch, that had strong autumn colors, and build the picture around that (there's a leaf like that in the bottom part of the picture, alittle to the left of the middle).
This exposure depicts waning summer light and cooler autum skies beautifully. I might have wanted to see a little more clear sky in the the top-left corner - just for "balance" and to give a more "cool" effect over the warm autum colours of the leaves. An an easy 8. Well done.
Conceptually i like this (even though I live where leaves never turn)... But it seems to lack "wow"... Maybe coming in closer on fewer leaves? Or further back for the whole tree? This just didn't stun me... Also, the focus seems a tad soft... But that's just me, and what do I know? :)
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