This 'transgression' may not be strong enough to qualify.
Death in an idyllic landscape being too cliche'. I fell in love with the clouds and forgot the challenge.
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I am waiting for something to die,
something to die within my sight.
I am waiting for something to see.
It could still show movement, life.
Life with halting, troubled heaving.
I like them small, with a big distress.
I am not doom. I am what follows.
I'm just here to dispose of the mess.
Rather sloppy editing - there are great big circles visible in the sky in the middle right, as well as a forest of little circle markings on the upper left edge. Now that I look at it more, in fact, the entire sky is full of visible brush marks, and you have a strange stepped gradient along the middle left too. And you have some flying twigs in the lower right fifth. The vulture also has some sharpening halos. It's a shame, because the careless edit ruins an otherwise very strong composition, which would have been one of my best scores in this challenge otherwise.
This is a visual treat, the contrast and texture are super-eye pleasing. I think you have achieved sad lyrics against a hopeful tune, or vice versa, and as such, have presented the bittersweet reality of life and death.
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