The connection to the challenge is absent without the title. The photo is an interesting candid shot of some guys making fools of themselves, with effective composition. I'm sure a lot of people will call it a "snapshot", but I would disagree. I don't know that I like it overly much though.
LOL, funny snapshot. to be honest, in my interpretation of the challenge (which is obviously different from yours), it doesn't fulfil the challenge. there's only the inbetween state, not the before and after (or even after and before). funny capture though. :)
This is a nice snapshot that needs to be a little lighter, but it doesn't meet the challenge. The title tells us why it is before and after, when the photo should show that. Otherwise we could take any photo and put an appropriate title on it and submit that. I hope you can understand, and feel you've probably heard this a dozen times already.