Am wondering if the presence of a posing lady was so necessary. Makes the image contrived. Just the raven would do it. Perhaps is just my dislike for posing postures
Building 450 is nice, girl is good looking, crow I don't know.
background is subtle. There is something wrong with the blend of all. The girl is clearly photoshopped there. I will give you a 7 because I know how much time spend on this.