The DoF and repetition are good, but the blown out sky is distracting. Try cropping it out by having a vertical photo with a bit less of the right side too.
In my humble opinion a closer crop on the left, cropping out all that overexposed sky, would greatly improve this photograph. I applaud the focus and color and subject choice, but am distracted by the line pulling me into the part of the photo you probably didn't want us to go. Hope this is helpful. :)
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