You have some very good things going on in this picture. Point of View, Depth of Field, shooting at a slow speed to create movement, the use of Lines and Shape and Form. I understand you wanted a sunset picture, but the lighting leaves to many ares dark that distracts from the overall image. I also encourage my students not to have their vanishing point centered. That makes your picture like a bullseye and doesn't allow your eye to wonder around the whole image. Keep up the good work and don't give up on the sunset time frame. It may not have worked perfectly for this image, but it is one of the best times of the day to take quality pictures. JG
great perspective, leading lines, light and mood. I also think the empty/negative space in the upper right and the bridge's structure on the left make for a cool contrast.
Took me a minute to understand your title. Now I get it. Would have been a little easier if the photo had been a little lighter. And that's all it needs. Everything else is great. Love the motion. Great motion shot. Lighten it a little and you have a winner.
excellent shot.. one of my favorites this week... I think your shutter speed was perfect to catch the slight blur on the train... great work :) = 10 - setzler
I like the colors in this picture and the lines are great. The convergence point is almost too centered for my taste, but it's still an interesting shot. 7
You've captured the speed of the train really nicely, that blurred feature on the door and window is really nice. The photo is sharp and is in focus, and the colors are bright, but I don't understand the story that you're trying to tell me.
Nice shot. I really like the way the fence seems to glow yellow and there's just the right amount of motion on the train. Great colours & exposure, well done.
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