The berries don't come out well enoug against the background. You might have concentrated on a smaller detail, so that the berries would have one single leaf as background. You might even have cropped this one.
Whilst there is some interst here, specifically in the colouration - although that has the feeling of ebing overly pushed - I find the overall construction of the image untidy and directionless. I would personally have tried to isloate the berries more strogly, either with more extreme depth of field, or simply framing them against the read of those leaves.
The contrasting colour is eye-catching, but you might like to try zooming in and a bit of close cropping or a wider aperture so that the background is not as intrusive.
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