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Very cute pic, great splash capture, but the overcast sky has led to a washiness in all the tones but especially the skin tones. There needs to be some contrast to add depth and realism. The bg is distracting - the roofline of the house bisects her head and the second partial line through her shoulders also draws the eye away from her.
You have the right idea in terms of POV, too many people shoot from regular standing person height instead of eye level with your subject. It might not have hurt to level the horizon of the sidewalk behind her, its offness leads to an uncomfortable sliding downhill sensation!
Hope this helps
Susan |
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