Hello from the Critique club
An interesting attempt that does not meet the challenge
In terms of the challenge brief there are no aspects of this image that are ‘ridiculously disproportionate’, everything feels in correct proportion. If you look at the challenge winners it will be immediately evident what was required to fulfil the challenge brief. The subject matter itself is also unconvincing it appears to be a normal controlled situation where everything appears as you would expect it to. Thank you for your processing details, I assume the second man is the pasted man, being a little larger than the foreground man? Again, there is not enough to differentiate their sizes this could be as expected in the normal scheme of size difference between people.
I’m sorry to be rather negative about your entry David but I would recommend you have a look at the successful front page entries for a fuller appreciation of what was needed to succeed in this challenge. Thanks for your entry, better luck next time. |