Hello from the Critique club
An interesting image that contributes well to the free challenge
Like you, I've never seen this myself, he must have been hungry! It also confirms how natural flight is to a bird that they can maintain their flight while concentrating on something else. In terms of frozen action this is an excellent example of it though personally I prefer to see more emphasis on motion, for example, with softness in the wingtips. I would also prefer the composition to be less central, this would crop well square with the bird in the upper right of the frame. A little less sharpening would benefit too there is some over-sharpening with halos on the feathers. I think the background could be lightened up just to make a little more appealing.
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