HEY! I like your choice of subject. A very pretty cliche.
The first thing that I notice on this shot is the quality. I don't know anything about your camera so maybe it's just low resolution which you can't help much. There's a lot of noise.
Secondly I notice that it doesn't look very clear and crisp, but the dof is pretty good b/c the bg is blurred nicely. The whites are slightly overexposed in places, and the colors need some correcting so that the white is more white than grey. I think flowers like this would pop better against a solid background - you could always just hold a posterboard or some fabric behind it.
I'm not too crazy about the composition b/c there's a big empty area on the bottom right and the top left flower is cut off. If you could possibly arrange it so that they're all facing forward and filling the complete frame - I think the repetition would be cool.
Overall, a decent shot that needs a little compositional help. I think the main problem tho is just the quality issue. |
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