Greetings from the Critique Club!
I recognized this immediately as a dance recital shot, as I've shot them too, and they are hell on wheels to shoot. If you don't know the routine, how many dancers, and how the lights are set, it's very difficult to get a good shot. I like that you took a tremendous risk with the 3/4 angle, which is punishing because if you want to get a lot of body parts in focus you need a ridiculously high DOF. Otherwise, to be perfectly honest, I can do little more than parrot what  primabarbara has already said with regards to the crop and so forth.
I hope you have learned from this critique and will continue to enter challenges here.
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