Hello from the Critique club
An appealing image that meets the challenge
I somehow knew this was yours Marcel before I came to your name, a lovely simple idea, well executed. I particularly like the way you have placed the convergence on the lower left thirds hotspot it enhances the composition very effectively. I like the circle of cross section of the end pencil in the middle of the points, but I think this could have been improved with a round pencil as opposed to hexagonal. Another minor point is the blunted lead of the blue pencil it spoils the symmetry a little but its not a major issue. Overall the image feels a little on the dark side, I think it could have enhanced it with some +EC to brighten it all up but its generally well executed.
Well done, thanks for your excellent entry. |
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