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Hmm the truck is in focus and the dominant elelment...but that is pretty much it! Sadly this image looks too much like a snapshot. The light wash over the front of the truck is a bit odd, and the reflection in the window distracts. The tilt is a little disconcerting...I keep waiting for the parking brake to go and bye-bye truck :-)
Finally the lack of a human in the shot just gives this a rather impersonal look. A passerby glancing at, a dogwalker letting their dog pee on a tire, a weary-looking mailman clambering up into the truck...that wouldn't guarantee a ribbon by any means, but would pull you up a little.
Hope this helps
Susan |
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