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thanks everyone that provided comments. I appreciated all the comments and look forward to putting some in practice.
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How about in the mouth next... I like the idea. Well executed too.
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this is a great idea, except that the dark area in the middle splits the photo into two.
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the image is a little dark and it could use some sharpening to make the detail stand out!
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The setup for this shot seems worthy of better lighting. Nice idea, though.
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Just a little dark. I can barely tell where the knife ends and it's shadow starts.
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a personal favorite (picture and food) :-) I like the way you set this shot up on the black background. 10
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I'm a little disapointed that its smooth and not crunchy peanut butter! Very original idea, I like it.
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It's a very interesting picture but I think it is a little too symmetrical. Maybe if the bread with the peanut butter filled the entire background. Just a thought.
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Another fine example of transition
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What a great idea! Would make a lovely advertisement for somebody. One of my favorites.
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if this was brighter, it could be a professional commercial for peanut butter! nice imagination.
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I KNEW they put the shells in too! Interesting idea. Maybe a bit more light, and contrast, but very nice.
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I like the addition of the full peanuts to the peanut halves in front of the peanutbutter jar. I think this might be a little too close. Too much black space in my opinion.
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great concept, great colors.
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Love the concept and execution. Nice!
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what!? no brand name? ;o) clever, i like it
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good transition, dark background suits
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was there no way to not have the label from the jar in the picture? its a bit distracting, especially the green bit! Great idea, but would have perhaps worked better without the splash of colour in the corner? Guess its down to personal preference. Nice picture.
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too artificial in my opinion
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Nice Shot!! I like it... I don't like peanuts or peanut butter either but if i did, i'd be headin down to make me a sammich right now!
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I didn't realize peanut butter had that much fat....Nice one. You showed quite a transition.
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Pass the jam ...... Im hungry
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Almost too dark for me... Would like to see a different side of the label on the peanut butter.
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Much more creative than flowers and leaves.
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This is GREAT. Alot of thought and effort went into this picture. I wish it was a little brighter but it's great!
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This one makes me hungry just looking at it, I like the composition, the black background is great, I also like the 2 nuts in the shells, a couple more wouldn't have hurted
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LOL great idea!
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nicely done, the knife appears too dark, though, maybe.
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you ought to put more peanut butter on your bread! ;-) I like how it kind of looks like an ad
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good setup for this still life. reflections on the jar are spoiling it though. Light in general needs some work, as the knife is too dark
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Is this transition or just different forms?
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Great composition, but maybe more light would be beneficial. Good shot though.
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Nicely done. The tight crop clearly defines the transition.
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Since you can't see the surface below, on first glance this looks like two photos composited! I'd have angled the knife the other way to catch the light. Good thinking!
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nice idea, but it's dark -- the knife looks like a piece of black plastic -- not tableware (although, maybe it is a picnic knife, I don't know)
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16 grams of fat! Maybe you should have taken a pic of your gut growing! Kidding aside, nice idea and well executed.
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