Hello from the Critique club
An interesting image that does not meet the challenge
Your twilight image of these interesting buildings are very appealing in themselves but I'm sorry I don't feel that they are at all allegorical. They represent a specific culture directly even though I see they are not located in the region I would have expected them to be. I think it is probably for this reason that you know this and it conveys a feeling of allegory to you personally but this does not come across to your viewer. For this to work effectively here anyone viewing it should be able to make that connection. On a technical level there feels a softness through camera shake but also some over-sharpening in the dome area. Your composition could be improved by moving everything further to the right so that the left is not so abruptly cut off and a better balance is achieved.
Thank you for your entry, hope you had a lovely festive holiday and a creative New Year to you. |