Looks like I haven't written a critique for the Critique Club in...5 years? Ouch. I am overdue so you're the lucky recipient!
You chose a great scene to photograph. I really like the colors and the small motion makes this a unique take on the image. I'm wondering if you had a shot where you under exposed a bit. That would get rid of some the details (like around the door) that aren't really contributing to the shot. You could even try just darkening the shadows in post to see if that has that sort of effect and see if you like it In Lightroom, for instance, you could just bring down the darks slider.
Looking at your score it's on the low side but that's simply because of the technical side. It's blurry but you knew that though so I am guessing that you decided to take a risk and try to reach people with the image. I'm glad you did because these kind of images are fun to make. |