COMPOSITION:
Pretty straight forward, but for this challenge I would try to get more of a 'square' feeling to it....maybe just rolling the paper up a bit. :|
TECHNICAL:
Nice soft focus that works for me. lighting is a tad dark, IMO. :|
ARTISTIC:
Very creative. The black and white treatment works nicely. Still not too sure about the square thing :)
great shot... i really love the concept on this one :) It reminds me slightly of a shot that I have done in the past... I commend you for working with a subject that stirs negative emotion. I don't think I have ever really studied the shape and composition of this scene before.. = 9 - setzler
Composition: Good
Technical: Nice choice of b&w. Border fits in very well with the black in the pic
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Pretty faultless. 8
All around this seems a little off (pardon the pun). It just doesn't seem square. The paper could be more square than you left it actually. Top of the paper looks like it might be a little washed out. - Inspzil
I like the creativity, but I don't really understand about why the paper is ripped like it is. I'm not sure, if the toilet paper is supposed to be apart of the 'squares' or not.
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