I like the concept and the composition but a uniform backgound wouldn't distract so much. I also don't like the long shadow on the table although that kind of lighting makes the nice texture coming out nicely. Still, I think a top lighting would be better. Also you could have easily removed the crumbs. The focus is good, very crisp!
Great focus. If I were being nit-picky (and obvioulsy I am), maybe you should have gotten rid of the crumbs scattered here and there Wonderful shot, and I think I will go grab some right now!
PS -- I vote for the sugar side!
Hey, Wheaties aren't squre. Wait a minute, they form a square! lol Good job. Nice simple composition. Haven't decided yet if I like the shadow or not. Nonetheless, I'll give youa 9. Great quality. Jacko.
Mmmm! More food. This challenge seems to bring out all kinds of square foods. This one is nicely done. Great title. Great lightly. Super good detail. A nice touch might have been to add a drop or two of milk. But that would tough.
I think that this picture was a very good idea. One thing that I think might have made it a little more intresting is by flipping two of the miniwheats over and using the frosted side also. Nice Job
I'd have removed the crumbs at the top and on the left. I can see white blobs at the edge - is this some weird American version of mini Shredded Wheat that have *icing* on them?!?
I was torn between these and triscuits, then scrapped both ideas for something else. My only nit here is the lighting. I like the sidelighitng to bring out the texture in the mini-wheats, but don't like the hard shadow at R. Maybe a reflector to fill it a little would be better. Nice work.
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