*Hello from the Critique Club*
The first thing that hits me with this image is the coloured wall, followed by the menu then the children.
A great slice of everyday life in a downtown suburb of the East, in this case India, if it weren't for the lovely local script this could be anywhere except that Momo etc are not readily available in my local vicinity!
I like the candid nature of the shot the children appear to be unaware of the camera and therefore naturally involved in their own moment. The colours are all very strong, I also like the way the colours from the writing are repeated in the children's clothes. I love the child's too big pink shoes!
I don't know if you've enhanced the children's faces but they stand out from their surroundings in a natural appealing sort of way. The only minor criticism of the children is that the action he is making with the scissors being so close to the back of the child's head make it look as though he is cutting her hair.
Altogether an appealing and natural moment in time well captured, reflected in the votes it received.
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