Composition: I wonder what this had looked like with only one window as a focal point with maybe that window on the left framing it? It is difficult to understand the photo without knowing the challenge. I do like the use of contrasting colors. Might have cropped out the top due to the "hot" lighting up over the roof. Although the group of square windows are somewhat framed by the other things in the photo. I do like the repeating patterns with the windows somewhat.
Technical Quality: The lighting is a bit uneven, the bottom bush a bit out of focus (windy day maybe?). No grain or post-processing problems noticed. Fairly clear shot overall.
Creativity: Interesting idea for the challenge, although no real outstanding creativity seen in the shot.
Conclusion: Well done photo, meets the challenge, may have used a little more energy/mood qualities to increase interest.
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You got that right. Looks almost like a prison or hospital. Which ever it is plain and dull. Great find. Photo seems a little light on the left upper corner and a little dark on the right side. Don't know how you could help that except wait on the perfect time of the sun, which may never come. Nice work.
The sun above the building is hurting this shot. It's very well taken, but I'm not wild about the composition. There really needs to be some focal point to this pic. - Inspzil
Composition: Seems slightly convex?
Technical: Nice focus/quality. Right tree looks a little dark?
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Nice colours and a good pic. 6
A bit faded at the top. I think a different angle would have made a better photo. Perhaps cropping to the one building (get rid of the division between building sections?).
If you had a wide angle lens, I would have shot just four of the windows. The scope of the photos is too large. You could even have a good composition if you just took a shot of one.
I dont know what it is about this picture that i like, I just do. Sorry for the useless comment, but i try to comment on them all. I find things to say about most. This one is just good. caught my eye and held my attention.
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