Well done for taking part. It's up from here on. Try playing with the photo again. Just convert to BW without any processing and have a look. If in doubt shoot in auto mode and the camera will do the work. Your camera does lack some mega pixels. Try taking the photo again with your smartphone. See if that helps.Don't be disheartened.in a few months you will see how much you have improved. This is the place to learn. God bless.
Don't know what went wrong here... Unfortunately I cannot find anything positive to state about this image. It's all washed out, over post-processed and very over-exposed, and no proper composition was taken into consideration here.