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I think this is water and dirty snow on asphalt? The leading line points the viewer towards something that is rather nondescript and unattractive. The debris on the ground - over which you have no control - trashes (pun intended) the intent of the leading line by drawing the eye to the right of the image. One from me. To improve this concept, I would suggest selecting a line leading to something more attractive - even if it is something you stage - and to make sure there is no detritus to distract from that line. |