They seem almost pasted in, as though the same gull is flying by over and over just to taunt you. Nicely imbalanced, space wise - which works very well to create an almost claustrophobic feel.
How can birds look so nonchalant when they are flying? Don't they understand what a feat they are accomplishing? This main character looks like it is auditioning for a part in the The Wizard of Oz.
The title grates a bit, but the uppermost bird saves the day for me; I'm always in favour of an arbitrary looking crop. Whole thing looks like a mobile, which is also good. Thank you.