Actually, I'm going to drop all the formalities for this one. I Love it. I can't think of anything that you could have done better, or anything which is specifically wrong. The colour is a tiny bit dull cause of the night lights, but you can't do anything about that. Did you try a picture during the day? I bet you would have just gotten a load of glare on the glass, so it's just as well you took it at night.
Your score obviously reflects that nicely :) I'm glad you posted this pictured! good luck in the future; if this is any indication of your work, I wouldn't be surprised if you walk off with a ribbon soon!
VERY interesting shot! Love the windows, and the fact that there is so much to look at. I had to import this into PS so I could really check it out. To be honest, I can't tell what is manipulated, and what isn't ! Love the nice warm tones with the bits of bright white interspersed throughout, and the repetition of the windows. This is cool.
I always enjoy seeing that weird warped effect in office building reflecitons like this one. Well captured. The way there are just a few windows with light inside them is really nice.
A very interesting abstract city life shot, lots to look at and keep the viewers attention. Perhaps a human element would have been good in the top center window.