*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A lovely portrait of a lovely model
You have certainly isolated her well from the soft focus background with good focus on her face which is essential for any portrait where the eyes must be sharp. I wish your model had just a hint more of a smile to make it even more appealing.
As you say, the lighting is good and uniform enabling you to bring out all of the essential detail. Lovely colours throughout, nice blues and greens.
I like the idea of having a fern across her shoulder the way you have but perhaps a little less positioned a little lower would have made it a little less distracting and rather intrusive. She has lovely skin tones but I am a little bothered by the paler region nearer her chin which though not too obvious mars the end result just a little.
I'm glad to see you using the 50mm f1.8 lens it is a great and inexpensive though often underrated lens, well done Sid |