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Transit? Transition? Nah.
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I think you're midway between two effects -- an image with a wide range of grey tones and a silhouette shot of the bus and the sign. Playing with the exposure to push it one way or the other might have yielded a picture with a higher impact.
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wish there had been some darker tones in this.
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the balck and white sky comes out really well.
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I like the black and white for this shot.
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good photojournalism. the flare and haze in the lens and the weird angle on the bus give it a faded nostalgic quality. interesting image.
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Not sure that this shot is well served by B&W. And the dark thing in the upper right corner is a bit distracting.
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Play on words here? --transit~transition-- Would have been better if the bus wasn't so cropped. The sky is nice looking, but, as I found to be the case in my submission, its a bit distracting
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Very well done. I especially like the black and white effect. You have a very creative eye! :)
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I think the sky is pushing everything else into underexposure, and it isn't all that interesting.
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neds some contrast work -- also kind of misted/foggy in places like your lens may need cleaning
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yep it fits challenge - framing a little off
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don't understand the transition, seems like there was some sort of smog in the way of your shot also
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Black and whites should have both. This has neither just gray.
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Nice Shot! I love the black and white. I think a little more exposure would have brightened the bus up a little, eh? :) Good job!
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Good shot, although maybe crop an inch off the top.
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Angle cuts off too much of the bus and shows too much of the sky.
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framing could have been a bit lower, to get the whole bus and loose some sky. Background seems cluttered
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I would have loved the added interest of someone getting on or off the bus.
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The idea of moving on to a new chapter in life also came to me. I would have chosen a Greyhound or a moving van instead of a local transit bus to bring the message home. Without the title, the picture by itself is a weak message.
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