I love this... until I get to the man. I think he either needs to not be there at all... or he needs to be more of the scene. Cutting him off at the chin... makes him seem like an accident, I fear.
I went quickly by this on first pass, but seeing it again I like it. It has a confusing harmony to it, busy and disparate though it is. I'm glad I stopped for a second look, for it's rather rewarding.