This picture has good composition. However for me the lighting does not quite work. A second source is needed from the right to reduce the strength of the shadows
The lighting is very pretty, it isolates your subject well. Love the colors and the softeness in this. Of its type in this challenge, yours is one of the few where the subject really appears to be asleep. Nicely done.
This photo doesn't appeal to me a whole lot and doesn't really set any sort of a mood for me, which I think could be accomplished with better lighting and angle perhaps...