I can't tell what you wanted from this - humour, irony, a wind-up? Whatever it is, this doesn't really work on any level for me. I'll treat it as a serious shot and say that the flue iin the foreground is obstructive, too centred and dominates the shot, while the background elements are not very intriguing and do not play a strong part in the composition. Image is washed out by the sky.
I do like the curtains in the building and the texture on the piping though.
I'm not sure where the visual interest is in this shot, I'm sorry. I don't like the pole right in the center, and I wish I could read all of the sign. A polarizer would have helped with the sky, too. If you don't have one of those, I highly recommend one, it's really helped with my outdoor shots! These are just my opinions. If you're happy, just be happy. :)
Your picture is somewhere in the middle of my votes.
It's not a bad picture but there's also not so much going on.
The sky is a bit washed out and uninteresting and there's just to much going on in this picture to realy give it a wow.
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