*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
An interesting image presumed to meet the challenge.
An interesting moment taken against a cold looking winter landscape. The composition fails in as much as the strong focal point of the paraglider is just far too central. I don't know if you have cropped from a larger original but just taking what we have here I would suggest that a far stronger composition would be to move towards a more traditional aspect ratio with the figure in the top right flying in towards the rest of the image. You could remove all that white from the top and crop to just above him, I think it would make for a better result.
Thank you for your submission, Sid |
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