Overall this image lacks interest. I don't understand the title, but that is okay. It is a square, but... ? What does it mean to anyone?
It is a dead end.. i.e. nowhere for the eye to go. Just stops at the end at the door/vent.
I am just trying to be honest.. please don't take it badly :0)
Composition: Nice use of adjacent shapes
Technical: Spot on
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Good photo, not sure it's as aesthetic as I would like
There is nothing that specatcular about this focal point that warrents this much attention to it. However you lines are very nice. They lead right to the door. From a composition stand point you did well. For content a ratty door does not do anything for me. I give yo a five.
Needs a little more light. Focus not bad. I would like to see a little more on the left side, as much as you have wall on the right side. Nice squares. Worth a 5. One question - what does you title "untitled film still" mean?
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