*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
An appealing flower study that meets the challenge well.
A very competent image of the camelia composed in an appealing off centre way. I disagree with one of your commenters I think the chosen aperture is most appropriate giving you a DOF with just the right amount of softness and detail.
I wouldn't mind seeing the occasional flower study without the seemingly obligatory water drops! It looks like you have used flash which is illuminating the front of the floor a little too much for me. I would prefer to see the natural hues and shadows, a lot of the natural delicate detail has been lost here through the use of flash.
Please forgive the long delay in this critique, I hope you feel the image and critique are both still relevant, Sid. |