I played a lot with this image on my screen and concluded that for me it would be far more poignant if the third upper part would be cropped. This exercise might fall into the so often mentioned adage "less is more". The absence of the hand makes the image incredibly powerful.
By the way, I gave it 8.
I gave this a 10 as it was very unexpected, and well done. Great composition, and chosen movement. The processing is a nice nod at the Collodion process :)