I loved this and gave it an 8 during voting, it was one of my top picks. I wouldn't change anything and would be proud to have taken this image. Love the grainy look and slightly muted colours.
A 7 from me (earlier). The hand looks awkward to me... like it doesn't belong to her and is from a person on the ground... reaching up to touch her. The matching sleeve helps a bit, but... it still is awkward and appears to be out of scale or something.
I know it's hard for you to see, because you still have the shooting in your mind... but the viewer doesn't have that privilege and must go with only what's here.