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Critique Club Assignment Composition - Interesting idea for a macro. Arranged well.
Technical - Focus could be better. Lighting is even and done well.
Overall - Has some good features. Maybe some more contrast would lift the colors a bit.
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Really fun shot! I like the composition - good score :)
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Composition: Good
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Nice job on the lighting, it seems to need more file size though.
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I like this photo. It is very cool. How did you come up with this idea? The image came out very clear.
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I like the way the treat pieces are positioned to give the photo some depth. The colors aren't too apealing.
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Good clearity. The squares are well defined. I also like the depth in this image. Good job.
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These look good enough to eat. Liver, cream, chocolate. Good job. Nice photo. worth a 6.
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I like the different colors and the variety.
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good texture. the shadows look nice.
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very very good idea, what kinda dog do you have.
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i think that by not having any real pattern to your pictures brought alot of intrest to your picture. I think also by having the shapes angled where you can see the wholes in the objects brought more attention to your picture. Nice job
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Good job, who would have thought dog treats would be so creative. I feed those to my dog.
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The corner of the box in the top right hand corner is a little distracting, and the shadow of the uppermost red treat is a little dark, but the concept is interesting.
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Vould be more interesting with more focus and a dramatic light from the side to bring out textures...
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