I love the idea of this! I just wish that you'd shot from a tad bit lower to make their feet actually... "stand" on the Coke cans.
As it is... there's not clear focus on the cans or the children, the male child looks bored and even the cans aren't in focus. And... the camera equipment is not necessary and is a distraction... unless ... it's covering something awful that would ruin the photo?
If one of the above had not been true, I think you'd have scored MUCH more highly than you most likely are. |