I might do away with the border - not because I have anything against borders, but it stops the feeling that the Kleenex boxes just keep on going. Great choice of subject.
i remember this. if you could have just filled that negative space on the top corner and avoided the reflection in the glass this would have been perfect. still very nice though.
Ok. I'm trying here. What I see is a cabinet filled with boxes of tissue. Many different brands and styles implies that different people brought them to "school?" The only thing that comes to mind is Georgie Porgie puddin' n pie, kissed the girls and made them cry.... But I' don't think he got extra credit for that--not even sure he was a proper student.
There's interest in the pattern of the boxes. The division between the closed side and open side of the cabinet cuts the composition in half, though with the offset shelves it is reminiscent of the Klee or Modrian type mondern paintings. Hate the orange and black border. Look forward to hearing your intentions next week.