*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
An interesting image that is assumed to meet the challenge.
A great action capture that has frozen the moment well. The flash has added an extra vibrancy to the image. Given the pleasing dark background it would be a lot better without the distracting lights and reflection, I think these would improve the overall impact if they were cloned out. I can see your reasoning behind the amended title but the new title only really means anything if you've heard the quote which I haven't and probably many others here haven't either. This is probably reflected in your score nd helps demonstarte the importance of a suitable title.
Thanks for your submission, apologies for the delay, Sid |