Greetings from the Critique Club!
Nice enough studio shot but seems to be a little too safe. Nothing objectionable about it, but nothing to get over -excited about either. After the focus-hungry voters see what they're looking for in the first shell on the left corner, there's really no other reason to look elsewhere. Maybe having part of the middle shell also in focus would have helped draw the eye in more? There also seems to be an odd double reflection happening right near the base of the shells.
That's the best I can give you, hope this helps somewhat
Susan |