Justine,
Thanks for the critique. I found it to be helpful. I agree with the part about the head. It and the dark jacket blend in with the background. A cap would've been good.
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Hello Jitams!
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Fits The Challenge-Yes.
Composition-Nicely arranged.
Background-Good.
Digital Processing-_Dark_. It's difficult to distinguish between the head, the camera and the background. Levels adjustment would of helped some, hair bleach or a light colored baseball cap. I saved this shot and lightened it just a bit...hey I can see you hair now. :) Technically this is a very solid shot.
My Opinion-Hope I'm not sounding overly critical.
I haven't even told you that I liked the idea and thought it was very clever and I voted a 7. My grandson's [ages 12&13] thought this was a riot and got a big hoot out of it. Three cheers for your good eye, and creative mind. Thanks for allowing me to review your 'Head Games'.
Love it. Right on. Would have liked a little differentiaion between the background ant eh head since the sign with the head is your subject. But still a good shot.
It looks like some tag team photography going on here - congrats. That also looks like a good camera in his hands. I love the humour of the sign in this shot - very dry. Composition is pretty good however the top edge is a little uncomfortable - difficult to crop with the top of the sign crooked. I wonder if rotating the image to crop along the sign edge would have worked or looked silly.
i don't understand what you are trying to portray. the sign is okay, although it's not to interesting to me. the focus is spotty at best and is almost distracting
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